Monday, September 28, 2015

Facing the Re-write

A novel lies
Before me
Covered with 
Detailed comments
Evaluating my narration
For elements that entice an audience.
Going forward with suggestions
Hoping to produce work
Inclined to draw a reader in to 
Join my characters on an adventure
Knowing safety while
Losing awareness of real time in
Motion and motivation that exists
Nowhere except in this imaginary world.
Open to whoever reads the story
Providing a
Question to 
Resolve.
Seeking
To see new found characters
Uncover the person who
Violated the call to respect life
With all dignity and love. Who instead
eXalted
Yet once more the cult of self--a
Zone that rejects the light of life.

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